An outside review (ChatGPT, from a screenshot) found the hero too
generic and the copy full of agency words. Checked each point against
the live page; the valid ones are done here:
- Hero now says who it is for: "Webdesign für Betriebe vor Ort",
"Websites, auf denen Ihre Kunden sofort finden, was sie suchen."
This matches the 500 € offer and the three portfolio pieces, which
were already about local businesses.
- Second hero button "Arbeiten ansehen" (#arbeiten); every primary
button now reads "Projekt besprechen".
- "Was wir anders machen" replaces "Individuell, sorgfältig,
technisch solide."; highlights I and III and the service texts are
rewritten as concrete statements.
- Mappe entries show "Die Aufgabe" / "Unsere Lösung". No invented
results: all three are concept work.
- Two FAQ answers filled where the facts are known (self-editing is
part of the offer; no on-site meetings).
- Two em dashes in body copy replaced.
Not taken over: the "500+" figure and "Mehr erfahren" button the
review mentions do not exist on the page.
Admin schema gains hero.secondaryLabel and mappe.items[].aufgabe.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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